Naseeb | Hopeless

कितना वो सबके करीब था,
इश्क़ ही उसका नसीब था,

जो बाँटता था महोब्बत सारे शहर में साकी,

शहर-ए-महोब्बत में वही सबसे गरीब था |

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18 thoughts on “Naseeb | Hopeless

  1. lovely and very true. the way u write hindi poems is awesome.

    1. THank you so much. Your words means a lot to me 🙂

  2. Very touching 🙂

    1. THank you so much 🙂

  3. Madhusudan, your poems on love are very heartfelt and touching.

    1. THank you so much for all your beautiful and inspiring words. It means a lot to me 🙂

  4. You are naturally talented, it seems. I am in owe of your short poetry!

    1. THank you so much for such an inspiring comment. I don't have words to thank you. I really appreciate it. Your words means a lot to me. Thanks a lot alok ji 🙂

  5. melancholic… very nice MS 🙂

  6. Soulful!!beautiful!!!

    1. THanks a lot 🙂

  7. wah bohot khoob MS

  8. beautifully penned

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